Post by barkerr ! on Apr 9, 2010 22:27:32 GMT -8
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lets start here ,,flamekit/flamepaw/ flamewhiskerdefined lines ,,male. [tom]seasons past ,,four years old. [48 moons]those loyalties ,,thunderclan.a common title ,,warrior.----------------------------------------------------------------------------a sideway glance ,,fiery ginger tom with captivating blue eyes.the tiny details ,,Flamewhisker is a tom who in combination with his looks and attitude, can sweep almost any she-cat off their paws with his charm. He is a rather large tom, slightly larger than most toms in ThunderClan, but really, it stops there, his limbs are lined with lean muscles, that give him a surprising amount of strength, but the slight appearance of a WindClan cat, but what more do you expect from blood that was never of WindClan? His legs are rather long, ending in medium sized paws and his tail and body are both slightly longer than most cats. His head is and even size for his body, with his ears being rather medium-sized and always pointed straight up. His snout is of typical length too, but his whole build fits almost perfectly together.
His pelt is what earns him his name though, his pelt is short and thick, but tends to be a dark flame-colored ginger. This is streaked with pale creamy ginger, this color smudging mostly across his lower face and paws. Across his right shoulder he has a scar that runs from the top of his shoulder blade down to his knee, along with a few smaller marks across his right hind leg. His eyes are almond-shaped and are colored one of the most vivid shades of blue. Really, most toms would see him as rather typical, but then again, he's swept enough she-cats away with a wink that it's hard not to admit that he is charming and fairly good looking to say the least.beyond the skin ,,Flamewhisker has never felt the need to escape his clan, though many time, his loyalty this way has been tested. He is a dedicated warrior, and although he can be rather slack when it comes to actually getting up to to his duties, he will do them. This tom has proved time after time he's a better fighter than hunter, and will often try every trick in the book to convince Wingedheart he isn't needed on hunting patrols, but is on border patrols, which he does simply because the chances of finding something half interesting are high, which is always a plus in his mind. Chasing out other cats and animals is only part of the fun though, he's found, as it turns out other cat's emotions on patrol are just as interesting to play with.
Toward his clanmates, he is a rather enjoyable tom to be around. He is extremely good at reading other cats and the situations that surround then and, along with his tricks and skills that he uses to show off, he can be a good cat to talk to. Even though he does prefer being in the spotlight around everyone, he will try and let others take turns. He tends to show off and make sure that everyone knows he is a dedicated warrior a bit too much and always has his head held high in a show-off posture. He can be quite an arrogant at times, but usually, this is only to those he doesn't consider friends. He will talk and show off to anyone in his clan and, even cats in other clans at gatherings. he tends to speak his mind to anyone and is extremely good at lying to others without them realizing it.
He tends to at times forget all about the warrior code and isn't afraid to break any rules set if it's to help his clan or his friends, though at times, it can be only to help himself, because he is rather impulsive and deals with the consequences when they come, not always caring about the wellbeing of others. He will openly claim things that, most of the time are true, that upset everyone and often enough he has been the cause of border fights due to this. Well how was he supposed to know Windclan cats got offended easily? But you see, it is because of this that his friends are only three or four cats who can deal with this and usually help him with his plans, though not always to their knowledge. He can mislead anyone easily which can cause a lot of trouble.
But then again, he is dedicated to those who are loyal to him as a friend and would do anything for them, even drop his arrogance and speak like a normal cat, the cat behind his facade. He can be quite sensitive at times but usually, you don't see that, like he likes to keep his emotions to himself. Sometimes not even his friends see this side of him. Of course though, he has never met the right she-cat for him yet. He can sweep almost any she-cat off their paws, due to his smooth talking and born charm, but rarely has he seen any she-cats who would stand up to him. The she-cat he would fall for, would be one that got embarrassed easily and would stand up against him when it came to his crazy plans. He's be overly protective and compassionate to them, along with even more loyal that to his clan.
This tom, to finish things off, is a pure-born fighter. He can't get enough of battles between clans and doesn't always know when to step down. This tends to worry a lot of cats, because he seems to have a fair amount of blood-lust and, when he does loose his facade in rage, he can be a dangerous cat that is for sure. He uses his wits and speed to his advantage, luring his opponent into a false sense of security, or into thinking they were able to beat him, before smacking them with it back in their face. Sometimes he just uses his sarcastic and misleading ways to get them blinded by anger or sorrow, because he does know what buttons to push on any cat to irritate them into attacking. barely ever does he actually start the fight. he fights mostly with words, his back ups with speed, tooth and claw.those roots ,,mother; tidewhisker, light ginger she-cat.father; embertalon, fiery ginger tom.first mate; dovesong, beautiful white she-cat.daughter; caramelpaw, tan she-cat with light blue eyes.